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A trace of wind pulled my soul away,
Ripped it from my grasp.
The storm’s great winds lashed at my sides,
Cold night air making me gasp.
My hair is knotted and blown,
And my face is taught and pulled.
My wings are gone, I’m rooted to the ground,
My future is gone, all hope diminished and dulled.
God save me, I’ve gone to far,
A hawk is at my eyes.
One last look into heaven,
As inside of me, my soul dies.
Ripped it from my grasp.
The storm’s great winds lashed at my sides,
Cold night air making me gasp.
My hair is knotted and blown,
And my face is taught and pulled.
My wings are gone, I’m rooted to the ground,
My future is gone, all hope diminished and dulled.
God save me, I’ve gone to far,
A hawk is at my eyes.
One last look into heaven,
As inside of me, my soul dies.
not a good day...
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I enjoyed your entire gallery. The photographs are very well done, and the writing is very emotional.
but this piece....the picture is nicely done. in combination with the writing this is a very moving piece. Great job imo.
[link]
there is a link to my big 2 picture gallery.
please take a look and let me know what you think. good or bad.
but this piece....the picture is nicely done. in combination with the writing this is a very moving piece. Great job imo.
[link]
there is a link to my big 2 picture gallery.
please take a look and let me know what you think. good or bad.